Talk:Jade Conway
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I dont want this to sound rude or insulting, but she kinda reads like a mary-sue. ;;>.> Maybe thats just a side-effect of being Vulcan, but thats the impression I got. I liked reading it, and it inspired some of the story for both Harmony and Khaise, it just needs more... humanity, I guess. ;) --Aisling 19:56, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
A very deep character, we can't wait to learn more! --9th-Adm. Sharpe 03:55, 10 October 2008 (GMT+9)
- Thank you. It is coming slowly, but anything worth doing normally does. She will be an interesting character to play!
- --JadeEnigma 20:46, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
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So...be kind. -- JadeEnigma 17:17, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- It's an excellent read! I'm looking forward to learning more about your character. In particular, I'm looking forward to reading about her experiences at the UCs and Harvard and learning more about her social life. So far everything is awesome Jade, keep it up!
-- Stark (Edwardthunderstark 07:35, 27 October 2008 (UTC))
Excellent character concept
As a veteran of pen and paper RPGs, I can fully appreciate good character development. The game system my friends and I preferred was open enough to be a mix of various setting incorporated into the current game setting. Character creation before the campaign started was an arduous process, which involved initial ideas from the player, and a lengthy session with me (the GM) and my stack of books, combing through to find the best fit for the concept. By the time the campaign began, both the player and myself were fully versed in the background, allowing us to really get into the story.
You seem to have taken a similar path with developing your character. You have a good background, with a solid outline of events and dates that can be fleshed out in short story format if desired, leaving ample room for even more stories on each subject. I'm really looking forward to reading more as they come along. -- Sam DeWitt 17:48, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you very much! -- JadeEnigma 21:11, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Good Background
Solid character building. I always love a good look into a character past showing personal experiences that have had long lasting effects on their life. Very thorough education record. Can't wait to see more... - Ensign.Ricky
FYI, Hybrid Category
-Rhikter 03:26, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
